The Loyal Son

Pinned on the ground by the beast. He was trapped. He tryed to get out but his wings where pinned under the beast's massive claws. Then there was a flash of light in the dark black and red skys. The light was blinding. He cover his eyes and saw one of his brothers before him. Then two others joined his side. It was Michael and two other angles. Brother I have came he to finish what father would not. Well you have? Yes. I have brother. Michael made a orb of light so bright it blinded the beast.

 It ran in pain away from the angles. Lucifer stood on to his feet. Brother we do not need to do this. If you join me. Will can rule together. I would never join you. I will be loyal to father till I die. Oh what a shame brother we could of built something grand. You will die here brother. Where you belong. Michael dived from the air at Lucifer.

Reviews

[genocide]

very good you have talent bro writing about angels is where the action is at

[Lord of mad men]

The fallen son is no angel he is something far great and far closer to human then one. But that is true angels a full of action and can be warped to anything i see fit.

[Nwang]

Nice piece. I have always been impressed any story dealing with Lucifer.