Without

I cannot live; nor can I die

 I cannot rest or be awake

My days are not bright or dark

My life is not good nor bad

My nights are not cold or hot

 My life is not full or empty

 My life is not a real life

 I am not living or dead

 It is not pain nor pleasure

I am not worth or worthless

My life is nothing;

Nothing without her

Reviews

[Wolf_Lord]

Your meanings come through clear and concise... Your message is powerful and the emotional connotations are crisp... This is very well written. I do however have a couple of suggestions that will make it better, not with the content, but with the formatting.

Capitalize the first word of every sentence... Second: Center justify it.
First sentence: (I can not live; nor can I die) [Increases rhythm and meter.]
Third sentence; second word... (days) not daya
Seventh sentence: (My life is not a real life) [fills out the sentence and maintains rhythm.]
Eighth sentence; (pleasure) not pleaser
Last two Sentences:

My life is as nothing;
Nothing Without you

Again: continuity: rhythm and meter.

One way I find to help maintain it for myself is to read it out loud to myself... even better, record yourself saying it out loud and listen to it... Nobody else need hear it.

Good job.
Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

[Cahjli Symes]

This is the true feeling of being jaded and numb over a long period of disappointments and emotional rollercoasters. Very relatable piece of art.

[GalaxyGhost]

This poem speaks to me as it sounds numb and since I dealt with the numb emotions of depression. In the end of the poem, "My life is nothing without you" is like when I experienced the lack of happiness.

[Lord of mad men]

Oh my gosh that is how I wrote it. I was numb and just done. You got this to the point and thanks for your kind words.

[GalaxyGhost]

You're welcome!