we our of the dark

In the dark

We search and search

But we find nothing but darkness

When all hope is gone

We stop the search for

What eludes us most

We give up

We give in to the darkness

Then we wait to

Be consumed by the thing

We fear most

But it never comes

Instead we are found

By a fellow child of the dark

Reviews

[Mitch]

The title confuses me a bit. To me it reads like "Wee hour of the dark" like very late at night or early morning.

I like your piece. Waiting to be consumed only to find a kindred spirit in the darkness. Not the outcome you expected. Nice write.

[Lord of mad men]

Thank you for your very kind words they are very nice

[Angel of the devil]

i love this poem. i am a child of the dark and i love this!!!!!! amazing and powerful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Lord of mad men]

Welcome child of the dark hope you fine a fellow child of the dark as I did. Thank you so very much for your oh so kind word. I very much liked then

[Angel of the devil]

thank you. welcome. its nice to know i am not the only one out here

[Lord of mad men]

Yes there are a lot in the dark alone and together.

[Angel of the devil]

yes, that is true