Will you?

Will you be mine?
To have an to hold?
Through good times and bad?
Will you stand by my side through sickness and health?
Will you be mine and mine alone?
Will you allow yourself to be loved and love?
I will be around even when your down.
I be there though the the day and night.
You make everything alright.
Will you let me be your knight?
I will always do whats right.
I will always fight to make it right.
If you will be with me tonight.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Don't really understand why this doesn't have any reviews.
I liked this poem quite allot myself.
I like the rhyme scheme that's really good.
It really sounds like Vows from a wedding it really does haha.
It was a super sweet poem and filled with loads of feelings and so romantic as well.
Sure your girlfriend loves this one to and loves being your inspiration for your writing :)

[Lord of mad men]

she knows i write about her just no as much as i do and they are vows sort of i took some of the plan old vows and then added my own. thank you so very much alot of my work does not have anyreviews as long as it has views i be okay thank you for all you kind words!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Im glad my reviews meant allot. I dont understand why your work has no reviews i think your poetry is great.
Your most welcome :)