Need

I have a need much greater then the need to breath
This need is what pushes me forward
This need drives me
This need is all that i am
This need is my very purpose in life
This need is lofe itself
For this need is to please

Reviews

[His]

This is really good and totally relatable :) I've spent most of my life trying to make everyone happy and get everyone to like me and I've learned the hard way that's not possible. You'd have to lose a part of yourself to please everyone and it's not worth it. Just focus on making yourself happy that's what matters most.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is a short but very good poem.
Short poems can say allot and have quite a strong meaning in such few words, that's what I like about this poem.
Everyone wants to please people in many different ways don't they?
I enjoyed the read. Keep writing

[D]

But please what? Yourself, then ok. Others? ...Well you might stumble across a very few who are worth it... And a lot of those who ain't

[Karmee]

Love this, very well expressed write, it's emotional and sincere.

[Lord of mad men]

Thank you again for you oh so kind words.

[Karmee]

not a problem :)