My dreams and nightmares

In my dreams
I dream of you
I see your face
I see you smile
I hear you laugh
I see you in my arms
I tell you my secret thoughts
But in my nightmare
I see you smile
I hear you laugh
I see you being held
But by...........
another

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

It's painful to have dreams, nightmares of such tragedies, but it's more painful to know that they could come true with any given moment in time...being so unsure of another's feelings for us, imagining them within another's embrace. I've had dreams like this, even been faced with such a harsh reality, but love will remain if it proves true...two may fall apart, but it will bring them back together if they really crave it...

[Lord of mad men]

spoken like a true poet. thank you for you kind words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have dreamed the dream, but woken up from the nightmare of the reality...

i would keep those secrets to myself if i were the speaker.

well spoken here.

j.

[Aimee Harris]

I enjoyed this poem. The imagery and emotion were relatable

[Bina]

I often too write of dreams, often there is truth in them. Excellent poem

[Lord of mad men]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[His]

This is beautifully penned but so sad and quite true. The person of our dreams can easily also be the person of our nightmares

[Karmee]

The ending is sad, but so well expressed. Very emotional.

[Lord of mad men]

I know i really had a nightmare about this more then once or twice. But it got more sad but i felt not to write that. Thank you for your kind word. They a very much appreciate!

[William Liston]

This is a very relatable piece ... I've had the same "dreams" and "nightmares" that are expressed in this poem. You've written a thought-evoking piece here. It certainly makes one think about how small differences can change everything ... it's funny how her happiness can either be a dream or a nightmare ... just depends on who's making her smile. This expresses an interesting theme on love (or perhaps lust). Thanks for sharing.

- William Liston

[Lord of mad men]

No thank you for reading and reviewing. Yeah one little difference can change ones whole world.

[Bina]

this was from a dream I had http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/kaeridwyn/1826286/