I have changed

I waited my whole life Without knowing
For someone Who was not like The others
Someone that thought deeply and Cared even deeper
Someone that Love greatly But would be loved greater
I was not looking or trying
I was alone But I was not The only one alone
There was hope that I may die
Before hope was gone
Then there was a new hope So filled with life
Full of life yes But fear and pain Was also present
I knew from the moment we met
I was gone and I was new
I could lose and be broken
I could feel But why?

Reviews

[Karmee]

Very well written and expressed. I enjoyed this

[Ian Richard]

You've tried the best you can,
I'm looking forward for your other poem :D

[Lord of mad men]

Thanks you very much!