I ask

I ask

A Poem by Lord of mad men

I am lost
Who am I?
I ask
Am I good?
I ask
Am I me?
I ask
Am I him?
I ask
No I not!
No I can't be
I won't let it
Be true
I try to better
Do I?
So must be better
Mustn't I?
What am I?
Am I like him
Is that so bad?

© 2016 Lord of mad men


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What am I?
Am I like him
Is that so bad?

I like these lines here, leaves a powerful question at the end.
Very nicely written and expressed

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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