I was and I am

I was and I am

A Poem by Lord of mad men

I was once lost
I was once alone
I was once locked
I am lost in your eyes
I am alone in your love
I am locked in your mind.

© 2016 Lord of mad men


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Love this write, very nicely expressed.


Posted 8 Years Ago
Wow, so much was said in such few words. I loved the profound emotions that I was able to feel with only 30 words. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lord of mad men

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Poopewpachoo

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome.
very powerful imagiary in such a short piece. Fantastic

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

powerful......
an inescapable situation......it seems......
i really liked it!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago
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good experssion of love. well done my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago
Really Great! After all he was lost, alone and locked...all in her! I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lord of mad men

8 Years Ago

Thank you yeah! I think I write best at night or early morning.

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