Not alone

As I freeze
I feel warmth
I find it in knowing
Knowing that I am not alone
That I will not freeze alone
I will not be forgotten alone
I will not rest alone
I will not be alone.

Reviews

[Jerryyoung1z]

Hmm, no one wants to be alone or should be alone. I think your writings will be much better with a Sharpened edge; don't be blunt all the time, jumping straight to the point, beat around the bush a little, it makes things more interesting and add a bit of glitter too, I mean rhymes. I believe a poem without rhyme is like an unpainted house.