A dark child is born

Please tell me if this may make a good story. It an a idea I have please say if it may make a good story or not? It would me very much appreciate.

Long ago in the dark of the night a child was born. A child born with no father.a child born of sin. A child born to role. A child born silent. A child born alone.

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (A child born to role) did you mean "A child born to rule"?

Review: Interesting concept, with this story be horror, fiction, fantasy or syfy? Whether or not an idea will make a good story or not is up to the author. The creativity and imagination that comes up with a story idea will also need to be able to come up with a storyline, a plot, characters and events to support the idea. So let me turn your question around "tell me if this may make a good story. It an idea I have please say if it may make a good story or not?" Do you think this would make a good story? Can you come up with a storyline that will interest people? A plot line that will make people want to read more? Characters that readers will relate too and imagine they are that person? Events that haven't been read about in every other story? The answer to these questions will not only tell you if it is a good story idea but if you are the one to write it. If you came up with the idea don't see any reason why you could not answer all those questions with a yes!

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