Knock knock dead

Knock knock dead

A Story by Lord of mad men

It a small town it was like most small towns. Besides one thing on the outside of that town was a hospital. Not just any hospital it was KaneRidge hospital for the criminally insane. The was a man he liked a girl. So he asked her for a date. She said yes. So he picked her up at 6:00. She was wearing a nice white dress. He wear a black jacket and white shirt with a blue tie. The car was I black car with tented windows.so the what to a place in the next town the drove past the gate to KaneRidge hospital. On the way back it was raining. They hit something. The man got out and saw nothing but he noticed the tire was flat. So he told the girl he will be back from the house down the road. She said but how will I know it is you? He said I will knock on the roof two times softly then once hard. She turned on the radio it was a rock song she turned it up. Ten minutes went by the man was not back so she said I will wait a little more. Ten more minutes want by no knock. She was about to unlock the Door when she heard two soft knocks. So she waited for the hard one it never came. So she waited then she heard two soft knocks again but still no hard one. She said maybe he forgot. So she waited then she heard to hard knocks. She unlocked the door started to open in when a cop grabbed her. Started pulling her into a cop car saying miss do not look back over and over. But she looked back and saw in the trees a red blood covered shirt then she started to cry. It was the man his hands were hitting the roof as the wind blow. The roof of the car was red with blood now pouring on the widows. Then she saw a man in red with a mask on. Then she screamed.because it was not a mask but it was of the other man's face.

© 2016 Lord of mad men


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