My Mind, Soul, and You

my mind full of thoughts in the mess which I call my mind is always full of thoughts of you Your percent always you are entwined with everything you are always in the back of my mind you have become a part of my mind and soul you left a deep imprint on my mind and soul.

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[Kristopher Fandrich]

You could make it much more of a poem by taking out excess words, lowering word count, and condensing the message.