A Grave like bed

and as the sun is setting down...

saying its goodbyes to another day...

a strange feeling of solitude and sorrow is crushing my chest...

releasing an amount of pain been hidden for years...

with a tear escaping my tired sleepless eyes...

i regret being alive...

and another lonely night shall be spent surrounded by the aroma of the long forgotten memories of a near dead past...

memories once locked within the desolated halls of my shattered mind...

alone...forsaken...and toremented...

cursed to carry this burden all alone....

with no one there to see behind the veil....

the shrouded veil that i cover my sad face...

a veil with a smile curved all over it...

hiding the pains from escaping....

cause it have an echo so devastating...

wandering the roads of the endless night...

hiding away from any sight....

seeking a shelter from the fading light...

and now i return to my frozen cage...

wondering till when...

till when can i endure...

endure all this bitterness...

all this sadness..

oh am near the edge of madness...

and now i lay in my tomb like bed....

with tears helplessly being shed...

asking for one wish...

to close my eyes...

and enter the eternal sleep...

a death sought for long time...

away from all this sadness and despair...

away from the lies..fakes and heart shatters...

i lived alone...

and shall die alone...

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

I enjoyed it. A little bit of a downer but it seemed real to me.

I'd get rid of all those periods though. It's useless at best and distracting at worst to use it on every single line and then some.

[Emily]

I really like the idea of this poem!
I also LOVE the title!
Keep it up!

[Waleed khaled]

Thanks alot for ur kind review my friend

[Emily]

Your welcome! :)