as death comes near me

inspired by draconian song death, come near me... that song words just touches everything within my desolated chest

the whispers of the shadows..
shadows from the once lost time..
whispering within my once again dead mind..
mocking my well to survive...
my hope to stay alive..
we are what remain within...
we are the truth...
not a daydream or a fading fantasy..
for ur unwanted destiny...

here now i shall remain...
standing feeling my heart beats within my veins...
my once again lost heart...
seeking reflection of the truth...
of the once again dead hopes...
on the shores of the once again frozen river...


here now i shall remain...
at the very corner of my cold cage..
motionless...
while the walls are closing over my empty corpse..
having no strength to run 
or even to fight...

sitting there...
watching the dancing shadows of my...
my once forgotten time..
seeking the truth..
seeking an answer...
for a questions once tortured me...
tortured my fragile soul..
while am sitting there motionless...
at the shores of the once again frozen river..
seeking nothing except reflections...
of the once again lost time...

all shall remain the same...
as death coming near me...

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

The isolation and profound emptiness in this write is felt deeply. I can feel the chill of death spreading it's cold fingers over the desolate soul. Very vivid in the images you paint in a murky sorrowful setting, yet I find the way you string your words together quite appealing. Well done poet.

[Waleed khaled]

thanks alot my friend :) and thanks for stopping by :)

[EmilyBianca]

Written about one of my favorite subjects to write about. death is a very morbid topic, but your poem expressed it quite nicely.

[Waleed khaled]

thanks ^_^

[Ashley Griffiths]

Great imagery here to describe the experience of death and how its embrace can touch everything.