To Whom It May Concern,

To Whom It May Concern,

A Poem by Andrea M. Ramey
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To Whom It May Concern,

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To Whom It May Concern,

I know more then a girl my age should ever know.

I grew up faster than any of my friends

I held in tears

I broke down, in my friend's arms

To Whom It May Concern,

I do not wish to live through any of that again

The good or the bad...

To Whom It May Concern,

I've been hurt my fair share and then some.

I've been crushed, lied to, and betrayed.

To Whom It May Concern,

I wouldn't change my life or my past.

Because I love the person I turned out to be...

© 2013 Andrea M. Ramey


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This piece sounds very interesting for the repetition of 'To Whom It May Concern'
four times.
I loved it but curious to know why the same line was used 4 times.

Posted 11 Years Ago


zainul

11 Years Ago

I understand now.
I love your wonderful piece.
Thanks for sharing.
Andrea M. Ramey

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It was my pleasure.
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome :))
really enjoyed the power of this piece. Amazing write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrea M. Ramey

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :3
I liked it. The one thing I didn't care for was the ending, but that's just my opinion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrea M. Ramey

11 Years Ago

Hahaha it wasn't suppose to end like that something weird happened, the finished copy is now up.
Jeff

11 Years Ago

Ah I see. It makes sense now.
Andrea M. Ramey

11 Years Ago

Hahaha yeahhhhh.

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Added on December 31, 2012
Last Updated on January 1, 2013
Tags: To Whom It May Concern, broken, good, bad, crushed, lied, broke down, more, tears, sad

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Andrea M. Ramey
Andrea M. Ramey

Wilson, NC



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When I write it doesn't matter if it's a poem, story, or lyrics my intent is to having you seeing a "mini movie" in your head. Everything I write has a story/reason for why I wrote it as I did. I know.. more..

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