confusion

confusion

A Poem by look.both.ways

Just because I'm high when I tell you I love you, doesn't mean I mean it any less. 
I know it means less to you.
Even though you get high too. 
but I understand..
I understand why seeing me high makes you hate being sober, 
and why seeing me sober makes you love getting high. 
I understand why my pain drives you insane, 
but your pain brings you clarity. 
I understand why you can't love me, 
even though your love for me is what drives you everyday. 
Just because I'm high when tell you I need you, doesn't mean its any less true. 
When you love me, its your touch that pulls me in.
Something inside of you breathes me in, but you're the one who breathes me out. 
Every time you breathe me out, I need you a little more. 

© 2018 look.both.ways


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I've never been high on drugs, but I've had more than a few drinks in my life. So, I get this one. It's a bit chaotic, but the purposeful structure makes sense here. Good write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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look.both.ways

6 Years Ago

thanks so much!
your confusion make sense

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

look.both.ways

6 Years Ago

glad to hear it!
thanks so much for the read and review!

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Added on January 31, 2018
Last Updated on January 31, 2018
Tags: love, sad, high, touch