The Friendship of Zack and Vivian
A Book by Lonnie Paul Johnson
 How do friendship start out, for Zack and Vivian it was a set up by a angel for a divine purpose.  © 2011 Lonnie Paul Johnson
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Hi readers this my first romance story so if it seem to be a little odd forgive me, but please give me your commits about part one "The Set Up"
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Aaaw. This will be a cute love story. :)) Anyway, there were a lot of spelling mistakes and grammatically incorrect sentences (usually, issues on Subject-Verb agreement), so I suggest that whenever you post a story, go over it a couple of times to lessen the number. Sometimes, these mistakes can discourage the reader to continue with the story because it will be harder to understand. But still, you're really good at thinking of interesting plots, so keep that up. Keep the next parts coming. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Loved it!! Only a couple spelling mistakes.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 30, 2011
Last Updated on December 3, 2011
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Lonnie Paul Johnsonfort Worth, TX
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I loved writing stories, when I was young I wrote very simple and crude stories base off of TV shows and movies I seen at the time. An event happen when during that time I believe influence my writin.. more..
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