Escape

Do you ever want to escape

 

Your thoughts

                     your mind

                                     yourself?

to be someone else.

 

vacuous

            thoughtless

                             empty

 

to have not a care in your head.

 

not a care

               not a fear

                              not a thought.

True Freedom

 

Do you want it?

Reviews

[MADAM]

I would love to escape! That would be an eternal happiness and comfort, to not care about everything and have a peace of mind ^^) it's liek the Buddhist mentality. I like the concept and the visual style as well. Simple yet it has a lot of depth, well done! Thanks for entering this!

[Stephen]

Yeah, of course, if the freedom'd come with you then of course, i'd love to want it.. lol (Kidding)
Poem's actually filled the drops of your love, heart, emotions and with your fragrance of words. It's a piece which's a combination of many things which're get loved by you so, the freedom still loves you cause your oneself a creator of your freedom. Lovely concept! Theme's great!

Keep up the great work!

[Antonio Valentino]

i dont know if its ego or what but ive never wanted to be anyone else..

maybe im too stupid to think otherwise :)

this made me wonder and for that i thank you
Antonio :)

[zainul]

Yes, I like escape now.
The burden seems intolerable.
Read minds of people so nicely!

[Reza Farhamand]

sometimes people like to go away from what they think is in a rut! everyone experiences it in his/her life. i really like your imagination. good job!