To What End

To What End

A Poem by Phantom Heart

Here I sit and stare
As if inadvertently unaware
The foreteller laughs
In the midst of improbable must
As I am burdened with exhausted lust
Suffering in the eyes of the fates
Opens up the doorway at Heaven's Gates
Alas, the provocative illusion
Of life's profane confusion
To find the equilibrium of love not lost
Of the truth at Humanity's cost
Life is pleated in shades of grey
Tomorrow is a better yesterday

© 2011 Phantom Heart


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M Storms,

"Tomorrow is a better yesterday" something to ponder.

Actually, this entire poem is something to ponder, there are certain lines that you just can't get in most places and you do prove the originality of them.

I have to read this more to truly understand every line working together as well as alone. It is an outstanding poem that makes me think.

Outstanding.

Have a wonderful day,

Legacy

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I Love the imagery of your poem, and the message it weighs. A wonderful write from the depths of your soul. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This really got me thinking. I love the last line, and I love your word choice throughout the whole thing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


M Storms,

"Tomorrow is a better yesterday" something to ponder.

Actually, this entire poem is something to ponder, there are certain lines that you just can't get in most places and you do prove the originality of them.

I have to read this more to truly understand every line working together as well as alone. It is an outstanding poem that makes me think.

Outstanding.

Have a wonderful day,

Legacy

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

excellent....


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Phantom Heart
Phantom Heart

Phoenix, AZ



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