This Dream

This Dream

A Poem by Phantom Heart
"

This is a compilation of dreams that I have had.

"

I am wearing a crown made of hemlock

And serving poisonous cups

At a wedding on top of a mountain

And I'm sitting in a lincoln continental

Watching the sunset-standing

Looking downwards at the waves

I fall on some loose gravel

For a moment I'm scared

But I land on a bed of roses

In the way of a stampede

I see a centuar shoot an arrow

It hits me in the heart

He has the face of a lover

I search for him

But I find myself hanging upside down

On a rollercoaster and I fall again

But I survive and crawl

Out onto a trail

And I fnd myself in a land

Of giant centipedes

And I'm running through ruins

Until I come to a waterfall

And I try to fly

© 2008 Phantom Heart


Author's Note

Phantom Heart
It's not exactly supposed to make complete sense, like dreams normally don't. It's written to be sporadic.

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I thought my dreams were wild.
Now I can truthfully say; That was the wildest,
scariest, most surreal , dream loaded with innuendo
and soaring imagination that I have ever read.
This dream is so fanciful that you will never have to
be afraid of dreaming again---- you can never top that
dream.

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phantom Heart

11 Years Ago

Thanks. Once in awhile I seem to have some strange dreams!
Precisely blurred and it is supposed to be that way, like dreams. =) Nice Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was AMAZING. Congratulations: You have the greatest dreams ever. xD And I loved how this was written like one would have a dream... very creative. So many beautiful images... I wish I could have such lovely dreams (except the giant centipedes... that actually sounds rather terrifying xD) Anyway, great job with this, it's definitely going on my favorites!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I reminds me of Narnia. The books and a little of the movie. I like your wording very much. I think I'll have to friend you now and read more. . .
I enjoyed this. Something about it was beautiful. Maybe the way you wording, almost pulling me into the dream(s) with you.
And I agree, it shouldn't make total sense,
For dreams never do. . .

BLFK

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Phantom Heart
Phantom Heart

Phoenix, AZ



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