The Time Keeper

My first draft, thoughts welcome.

The time Keeper

Divide the helix of time

Leave heartache filed in 

The library of the past

For art's sake we create

We are visionaries in our present

In which the world unfolds

The hourglass is nothing more

Than time-turned on itself

Creating limits in our future

The pinnacle of progress

Is in the luxury of ordinary minds

An intellect that is ageless 

Author's Note

Just a first draft

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

So far so good I always say but later as you run it through your mind you'll come up many words that will make it better, you may go through many draft's before you're satisfied. Keep on writing and thank you for sharing

[Unspoken poet]

SO very nicely written, enjoyed this. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong statements left something for the reader to think about.
"For art's sake we create
We are visionaries in our present
In which the world unfolds"
I agree and I liked the lines above. I wanted to read and know more. Thank you Morgan for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[KCthelastboyscout]

Excellent story. LONGER please. The direction you are going you have a willing follower

[Phantom Heart]

I promise that I will work on it! :)