Love Lost

We all go through it, we all are a part of it.

My love is a beautiful song in June

It's the summer wind echoing sweet whispers

Whisping tall grass as you walk along your path

My love are the embers in a fire

That at first were doused in fluid

Ignited with the single flick of a match

Our love is what was promised forever

Yet slowly the fluid dissipated 

The underlying embers became cold and callous

No more matches were lit

My love was a beautiful song in June

Author's Note

I was writing, listening to the sounds of the rain this afternoon and I wrote this quickly, it seems to end abruptly to me on a personal level, however I would love your thoughts and any positive feedback. Thank you for reading and taking the time.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Beautiful write! The second stanza stood out the most to me with powerful imagery. But overall, you told a very true story from the heart. Maybe every piece of poetry we write is coated with little personal truths about who we are. But it's sad to know that not every love was meant to last or have a happily ever after. "What's meant to be, will be." And love is not something that survives if you must have to constantly fight tooth & nail for it. You can't force love to work if it wasn't meant for what your heart desires.

[Phantom Heart]

Again, thank you for reading and commenting. :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

quick writes sometimes are the best and you've done a great job with this piece lots of things happen in June win or lose, love is sure to be one of them, thank you for sharing

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

[WILDERNESS]

That describes the love affair of one summer, or perhaps infatuation taken for love ............... enjoyed

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!!!

[zaisham9393]

I loved it especially the opening line.I loved it, so thank you so much for sharing :)!

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem dear friend.
"No more matches were lit
My love was a beautiful song in June"
The Summer love. The sweetest love. Thank you Morgan for sharing the amazing poetry for love and the month of June.
Coyote

[Phantom Heart]

Thanks again! You're awesome!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.