Thoughts While Smoking a Cigar

Just my rambling brain doing what it does best!

A plethora of trendy dishonesty

Plagues the noble soul

There are flaws in wisdom; knowledge

But the heart belongs to love everlasting

There's not reality for perfection

Life should be infused with

light, beauty and liberation

Where life faults; ignorance

Its the express lane to 

Sorrow, detestation and apocalypse

The true elixir

For the honest aficionado

Is the unusual complexity

Of redemption

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nothing better than a cigar and times to think. I don't smoke cigarettes. I do like a good cigar. I like the tone of the poem.A relax flow of words leading the reader to good place and a need a for a good cigar. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you Coyote. I appreciate your kind review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Unique word play with thoughts conjoined with emotion.clever.short and sweet.to the point.well done.

[Mauricio Montoya]

ether lifes up in smoke or for me, i ponder the thought while having a smoke it helps me relax, love how the words come together in this piece. great job thank you for sharing

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for taking the time to review! :)

[Philip Muls]

Nice play of words. Life infused with liberation, nice. Enlightenment.

Well done.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you. :)

[Maryam Mottahedeh]

I like the conclusion... speaks of Karma. That's what I get from this complex piece:)

[Phantom Heart]

I know its late to comment and say thank you, but thank you!!!! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm convinced God was s**t faced when he created the human race

[Phantom Heart]

I agree to that! :)

[A. Amos]

I really find this sharp and intellectual write, well need to understand the positively about life. I truly enjoyed this read and thank you for spreading awareness my friend.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear

[WILDERNESS]

Thats how it should be .......... but look at humanity, going in the opposite direction. Nice one..

[Phantom Heart]

Of course its going in the wrong direction, but thankfully there are those of us holding it together. :)

[WILDERNESS]

The pen is mightier than the sword.............. isnt that what tthey say.......... :)

[Phantom Heart]

Funny, I think of that line sometimes. Some days I agree and other days I call bullS#$% HAHA! But its true.