Spirit in the wind

A poem about learning and letting go

Each day, becoming my past

My awareness of knowledge

As I tune into

My courage to change

The negative constants

Of this journey; my life

Is nothing more or less

Then the beauty of sunshine

Each scent of flower I smell

As I walk the garden path

Brings me back to 

My natural state of being

It reminds me to let go

of my contempt and

hostility towards the world

It allows me to forgive

Each dewy tear brings release

As I  find comfort

In the perfect atmosphere

That mellows me to temperance

I know the road

That will take me home

The way to the skies

Is to follow the light

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem.
"It reminds me to let go
of my contempt and
hostility towards the world
It allows me to forgive'
The above lines are true wisdom. Nature and a peaceful place allow us to find way to forgive and forget. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Phantom Heart]

Thanks Coyote. :)

[Flutterby aish]

WOW....ITS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! JUST A FEW WORDS THAT TOOK MY BREATH AWAY!
AN AMAZING PIECE!!!

[Phantom Heart]

Much appreciated! Thank you for reading.

[Flutterby aish]

welcome!!! :)

[WILDERNESS]

Just what the doctor ordered....................... v nice indeed.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

We all need to let go of what won't let go of us

[Phantom Heart]

thanks for reading. Good point too.

[Maryam Mottahedeh]

It is to follow the Light:) I Agree!

I think you have an extra of there in the last line of the first verse... or not

[Phantom Heart]

Thanks. I am going to fix it right now. :)

[A. Amos]

This is pure, raw and words right from heart, as a reader very well felt. I truly love your work, keep on writing...



Then the beauty of of sunshine

Above line you have double, "of"

Just fix it, good work

[Phantom Heart]

Thanks, I can't believe I didn't see that one! :) Thank you for reading, I appreciate your reviews.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear, I hope you didn't mind me pointing out the error?

[00000000000000000000000..]

Well said and well put:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for reading. :)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

My pleasure Morgan:)))))))))))))))))