Bombshell of Eden

If Adam was a gentleman. :) J/K

Lace trim pencil skirt

White fitted silk blouse

Cherry red pillow lips

Her lilac perfume

Stagnant in the summer air

Pink hazes of sunset

Hovering; the last light

A sweet kiss at twilight

In his Coupe de ville

A gentleman's a gentleman

And homeward bound

He took her

  

Reviews

[Chris]

Poster images of the past...and the thoughts that soooo seem to fit. And yet the age is really not bygone nor ever out of date so long as each respects the others' right to say yes OR no thank you - no harm, no foul.

Life is confusing and catching your breath isn't always easy. Being a real friend requires more than just having the title. But it also carries the real responsibility of making real (but hard) choices and standing up while others cave...

I liked the tones of this one read aloud and the images I pictured behind my eyes.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you Chris. I really think that it is always good to be classy, man or woman, old or young. I value boundaries and respect for others and I think that it lacks in the world today. If we as people had more boundaries for ourselves and others, we would have to fix a lot less problems after the fact. I appreciate you stopping by and taking your time to read and comment. Thank you for liking it!

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Sounds like a romantic place where lovers call the spot. I loved it:) Where have you been friend?

[Phantom Heart]

I have been around! I had a baby and well, she is a lot of work! But I am trying to squeeze writing in!!!! Thank you for reviewing!

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Awwww well:)))))))))))))) that's good, I don't have any kids but their awesome:)))))))))))) I was wondering about ya , Your very welcome:))))))))))))) You take care now:))))))))

[Luke L]

Coupe De Ville? What is this some 60s s**t? haha good stuff though :)

[Phantom Heart]

Now that you said it, I could have used a cooler car! Thank you for reading Luke!

[Luke L]

No problem

[icelandicblue]

I like this very much. It has a very 1950s vibe to it. I enjoyed your imagery and your assault on the senses. Absolute joy to read. I had to come back and edit this and add I love the double entendre at the end. Clever.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you. I had an old picture of my grandmother at the beach and it reminded me of a time that I didn't live but visualize; the time when (at least) it seemed to be romantic and respectful. When women were ladies even if they were bad! :) I appreciate the review.