Soul Diving

The start of something hopefully good...

Loneliness is sadness in silk sheets in a mansion of wealth
Anger is a madness of obsessive self-destruction
Hate is an empty expression that martyrs to the dark
Friendship is a union that enables effortless benevolence
Love is the aroma of orange blossom honey on a warm afternoon
Laughter is the condensation of life that quenches the world's thirst

Author's Note

Its something that i am currently working on. I am not sure at the moment where I want to go with this.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This is a very creative listing of metaphors that evoke moods: It may also be written in this other way to make it more personal.

Lonely is the sole survivor on an isle of wealth.
Angry is the ...
Hateful is the ...
Friendly is the ...
Loving is the ...
Joyful is the ...
Funny is the ...
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[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for the ideas. It was helpful and I like a new perspective.

[Just Kim]

A wise beautiful read

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you.

[Maryam Mottahedeh]

Ah, it is so beautiful! The feeling of the rising of energy building to a burst of Laugher!

[Phantom Heart]

Thanks!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

brilliant!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. A lot of good wisdom in your words. I like the three positive statements in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Phantom Heart]

I wanted to end the poem on a positive and loving note! Thank you for the review.