Soul Diving

The start of something hopefully good...

Loneliness is sadness in silk sheets in a mansion of wealth
Anger is a madness of obsessive self-destruction
Hate is an empty expression that martyrs to the dark
Friendship is a union that enables effortless benevolence
Love is the aroma of orange blossom honey on a warm afternoon
Laughter is the condensation of life that quenches the world's thirst

Author's Note

Its something that i am currently working on. I am not sure at the moment where I want to go with this.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This is a very creative listing of metaphors that evoke moods: It may also be written in this other way to make it more personal.

Lonely is the sole survivor on an isle of wealth.
Angry is the ...
Hateful is the ...
Friendly is the ...
Loving is the ...
Joyful is the ...
Funny is the ...
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[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for the ideas. It was helpful and I like a new perspective.

[Rose of many colours]

amazing start you will have a dynamic finish

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you!

[Leigh]

Well chosen descriptions and explanations for each of these emotions, nice lines indeed

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you!

[WILDERNESS]

absolutely beautiful ............... and true.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you!

[Keith]

Well chosen words, well done.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you. Thanks for reading.

[Nix]

Love the idea, great poem. My ultimate goal is always to evoke emotion in the reader, and this evoked emotion in me. Mission accomplished! Great job.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you. I try to aim for evoking emotion as well. I like to play with words and I figure that if I feel what I'm writing then the reader will too. I think you are the same in that aspect from reading your writing. Thanks for reviewing I appreciate it. :)

[writingislifex3]

i thought it really connects to most readers. it's how most people feel and that's what draws us in.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you. :)

[Luke L]

Lovely piece I like your style :)

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

Nice and lovely...:)

[Phantom Heart]

I thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Samuel Dickens]

I guess you could add more words, but it's very effective as it is. Imaginative, wise and introspective--I like it.

[Phantom Heart]

Thanks!