forever my dear

A poem for my love.

I am going to keep you my love

Till the pyramids dissipate

In the sands of time

My words will promise forever

until the sun ceases upon implosion 

And all the aftermath is darkness

The Gods at Delphi will laugh incessantly

As they would not believe 

our togetherness dictates

A remarkable continuum that

Tomorrow is a better yesterday

Flying away on a monarch butterfly

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

See, I told you !
I just read all the reviews and they think
you are the best too.
This poem about love is exciting. For a while I thought
it was the best thing I ever read, then I read it again
and changed my mind ---- it was better than that.
Write me something like that and I`ll just float away on
my cloud.
------ Eagle Cruagh

[Maryam Mottahedeh]

So Deep, SO Deep! Go Girl!

[Morgan Storms]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

I agree . This is a really good write...:)

[Morgan Storms]

Thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Morgan Storms]

Morgan, dear how brilliant your writing is... this is so good...
"Till the pyramids dissipate In the sands of time" and " My words will promise forever
until the sun ceases upon implosion And all the aftermath is darkness The Gods at Delphi will laugh incessantly" I really love it when a reader take me to older times, with the right culture aspects, you did that for me tonight. Your love should be proud of you... ;) the perfect love, between you two, thank you for sharing! just fantastic.

- Elisa

[Morgan Storms]

Thank you very much! :)

Very welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. I like the description. Good to hold love as special and the best part of a life. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Morgan Storms]

Thank you!

[Carolann Dowsett]

How beautiful to know such love. This has a dreamy quality to it. A delight to read.

[Morgan Storms]

I appreciate the read and kind words. Thanks

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome