forever my dear

forever my dear

A Poem by Phantom Heart
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A poem for my love.

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I am going to keep you my love
Till the pyramids dissipate
In the sands of time
My words will promise forever
until the sun ceases upon implosion 
And all the aftermath is darkness
The Gods at Delphi will laugh incessantly
As they would not believe 
our togetherness dictates
A remarkable continuum that
Tomorrow is a better yesterday
Flying away on a monarch butterfly

© 2013 Phantom Heart


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See, I told you !
I just read all the reviews and they think
you are the best too.
This poem about love is exciting. For a while I thought
it was the best thing I ever read, then I read it again
and changed my mind ---- it was better than that.
Write me something like that and I`ll just float away on
my cloud.
------ Eagle Cruagh


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love should be timeless, and your poem reflects that. I really like how you use the power of love being use when age have overcome the world. Sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Fantastic and romantic, all a big surprise. I have to wonder if this wave is too big to ride.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phantom Heart

11 Years Ago

Thanks fro stopping by and reading! It is a pretty larger than life wave... :)
Great stuff very romantic sentiment. Also thanks for all the reviews on my stuff!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phantom Heart

11 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by! and you are also welcome!
Sensual and somber, lovely poem on epic love. Great read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phantom Heart

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
A beautiful poem of love, displaying lovely imagery. I look forward to reading more of your work.




Posted 11 Years Ago


Phantom Heart

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
This is a beautiful love poem that says so much through the use of historical and natural metaphors. Such a love would please the Pantheon on MT. Olympus. I'll be riding butterflies in my dreams tonight.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phantom Heart

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
See, I told you !
I just read all the reviews and they think
you are the best too.
This poem about love is exciting. For a while I thought
it was the best thing I ever read, then I read it again
and changed my mind ---- it was better than that.
Write me something like that and I`ll just float away on
my cloud.
------ Eagle Cruagh


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Great imagery! Very descriptive and specific. I do believe a little more rhythm could make this one of the best love poems I've heard!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! That is a long time to keep a love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phantom Heart

11 Years Ago

Well...At least until I die. :) Thanks for reading.
Such a lovely and deep write, like this alot

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phantom Heart

11 Years Ago

I appreciate the review. Thanks.

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Phantom Heart
Phantom Heart

Phoenix, AZ



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