The Key

I wonder why I can't be loved;

Is something wrong with me?

When I look in the mirror

Do I see what others see?

A man longing for affection and love

Searching for answers from far above

I didn't hear a thing, to the questions asked

My pain and misery seem very well masked

Trying to find love in a world of none

Trying to find hope in the eyes of someone

Not knowing where or what I'm searching for

I'll know when I find you

You'll hold the key to my every door

Reviews

[Archia]

That was really good, I enjoyed it. I just have one thing, is the different colours really necessary? I'm not sure I see a point to them. But the content was great, and the rhyme was lovely to read.

[Sami Khalil]

This poem was so good. I like the ending the most...Bravo

[Baby Ricochet]

I think you need meds.......

[Angel]

They say there's someone for everyone
Well, that may very well be
For every guy there is a gal, a guy for every gl
But where is the one for me?

[Mike Emil]

when I think like this I stop
no point
waste of time to wonder
it's other people's fault for not showing love
besides brandy loves me fine
HAI!!!