Can You Hear Me

Can you hear me?

Begging for true love

Can you hear me?

Searching for answers from above

Can you hear me?

The nights I cry out for you

Can you hear me?

Or see the tears in my eyes of blue

Can you hear me?

I've been calling out your name

Can you hear me?

Your response is always the same

Can you hear me?

When I speak to you at night

Can you hear me?

I wish someday that you might

Can you hear me?

My heart is screaming so loud

Can you hear me?

Because you're nowhere to be found

Can you hear me?

Why do you not answer

Can you hear me?

My life is such a disaster

Can you hear me?

Am I not good enough for you

Can you hear me?

I'm still begging for you

Can you hear me?

I just want your love

Can you hear me?

My dear lord above

Can you hear me?

When I cry alone in the dark

Can you hear me?

When I ask you to heal my heart

Reviews

[Saumya]

loved your internal interaction with God, in words....
my friend, God above, has always, is and will always listens and will listen to everyone....:)
and he gives us our answers in the silence of our hearts... try to listen its voice, and you will definitely feel the great change...:)

i completely enjoyed reading this, and
loved the repetition of
"can you hear me?"

well done:)

saumya

[Rosaria_V]

Love this and the fact you used different colors when you got to another point :)

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Give in to it then let it flow.... I just want my expression to be heard
I want every word to be bird.... And fly to your ear and perch its self in your understanding....
I am landing on depression... And it has become my obession... But I found something new God is Love.... And through Love you will find that there are many answers to one question and you have asked many questions... The answers lay in your journey... They bury themselves in trails..... You can keep picking with the question standing still or move and go aquire the answers even if they aren't the ones you seek they are answers.... Tis love is all...... Edet Sira Rambling Poetry... Sorry I rambled but I love this poem I come back to feeling the exact same way sometimes because its familiar and it became something I loathe but love to feel.. a pain addiction....

[Michael Stevens]

Excellent writing! a fine poem!

[Eddie Phillips]

A great allusion to the loneliness of love. We scream out with our hearts to be loved and hope that someone will hear us. Hopefully one day someone will hear our cry and find us wanting. Great poem!

[LadySoDivine]

Wonderful work of art. Screaming so loud and begging for help, but still there's no one to hear it. This really touched my heart. Well done!

[Riding the Rainbow]

Amazing and touching piece..

[Amaya Sullivan]

I believe everyone has been here many times in their life. Sometimes we have to go through a lot of pain to understand His will.

This is filled with so much emotion I can relate to. Very well written.

[Catlen]

Wonderful poem. Very well-written.

[Angel]

He hears you, and His heart breaks with His love for you. It is only His love that can heal your heart, my friend.
This is a beautiful, heartfelt, and soul stirring prayer. I feel your anguish, as one who has been there. It is a difficult journey...but sooo worth the trip.