Can You Hear Me

Can you hear me?

Begging for true love

Can you hear me?

Searching for answers from above

Can you hear me?

The nights I cry out for you

Can you hear me?

Or see the tears in my eyes of blue

Can you hear me?

I've been calling out your name

Can you hear me?

Your response is always the same

Can you hear me?

When I speak to you at night

Can you hear me?

I wish someday that you might

Can you hear me?

My heart is screaming so loud

Can you hear me?

Because you're nowhere to be found

Can you hear me?

Why do you not answer

Can you hear me?

My life is such a disaster

Can you hear me?

Am I not good enough for you

Can you hear me?

I'm still begging for you

Can you hear me?

I just want your love

Can you hear me?

My dear lord above

Can you hear me?

When I cry alone in the dark

Can you hear me?

When I ask you to heal my heart

Reviews

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow this is very beautiful and very moving.

[minisla]

A very emotional and sorrowful write. Love is often the biggest pain one has to endure

[Luke Rawlings]

A great poem. A crisis of faith captured in words, I did enjoy the read. :)

[gombeggar]

really don't think u need the color changes in yer stanzas

[candaceflynn]

i love this! I can picture you standing by the window and screaming "can you hear me?" amazing poem

[smilempsn]

Amazing write.. with amazing questions and the repetition of 'Can u hear me' ...

[Astro]

I like the repetitiveness, as it gives the reader a sense of time passing, and many a prayer spoken with a fading faith. There are a couple of weak rhymes but, understandable in the scheme of the emotion and voice in the poem so, it doesn't effect the strength as much as some breaks in rhythm might. Nice one.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

You wrote this piece very well. I can tell you put your heart into it. The flow of the poem was perfect, very nicely written.

[Mike Emil]

there's not enough saki
for me to answer this

[Barbara Walker]

Searching for an answer in rhythm and rhyme. Well said!