Asylum

Common title, My first poem :)

Asylum

Death is so sweet. 

It holds me in its comforting arms. 

Sorrow is the heart of all death

The laughs of the graveyard

That is the true Asylum...

Reviews

[KittyStarr1101]

I like this piece.. it tells so much, but yet so little.

[emma]

great write. really dark.

[....]

wow cold write, i can feel this. Awesome write.

[Lemontine]

Cool and creepy at the same time, I liked it

[Solitary Dreamer]

Awesome poem. I like the darkness of it:)

[Jazique]

Interesting deep and dark. Nice short poem. Well done as it got me thinking.

[Silent Knight]

Very nice. I like it.

[Day Dreamer]

Wow, love it! So... moving. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A thoughtful and almost stabbingly simple prose, a delight to read.