Asylum

Common title, My first poem :)

Asylum

Death is so sweet. 

It holds me in its comforting arms. 

Sorrow is the heart of all death

The laughs of the graveyard

That is the true Asylum...

Reviews

[Akashi]

Yes. Most people love death because of thinking of the next place to go, leaving a bitter earth. Is that what you meant, or otherwise?

[Eagle Cruagh]

Death:
Why fear it we have no control over it.?
Why consider it ?
I think you have written an extremely interesting
and beautifully executed poem. I would have chosen
another subject, but we all must choose what we pursue.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Mockingbird]

makes death seem very alluring. i took 'the laughs of the graveyard' to mean that they mock the living in thinking that death is sweet. i see the contradiction making a person feel trapped in an asylum of their mind.

[kink]

sorrow is the heart of all death..wtf??

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Short but effective....

[No name]

I really liked this piece there is just something about it that had my attention. Nice write.

[Felecia]

I really enjoy this poem. It's very little, but it tells you so much at the same time. Very nice.

[seeeker78]

Sublime stuff, I like the way "Asylum" is the last word and it is capatilized, loved it :)

[Boldpen]

WoW!!
A enrapturing piece.... small but gracefully written. The words were so wonderfully able to convey the deep meaning! Great job!

[paparapapa]

Short but captivating. Great job for your first poem. Do some more! ;)