One light

        There is only one light in this world

        But one single blow can make it disappear

      behind the darkness is a girl who is surround my death an depressing

     She has friends but she claims them as no one  

      They talk about her behind her back an say that she is not wanted on this planet

She feels all the love that no one has gave her

She just want one person to love her an show her that not everyone is rude

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Sometimes, we are at our most lost in a crowd. Thanks for sharing this honest and open piece.

[Michael G. Smith]

That's all it takes is one, then why is it so hard to find? because it is special and too many other lights are artificial. Thanks for sharing a piece of self with us.

[Xerclipse]

This is awesome. Its definitely relatable because the light is so vulnerable and can be blown away. You should keep it up.

[DeCipher]

I truly love this poem, and can relate in many ways. It sucks being alone, but eventually you fight through it. Don't give up.