I Need

I need air. 

Not out of breath.

Not gasping.

Not crowded.

I just need air.

I need to slow down and breathe.

For so long I had buzzed by.

Not noticing my surroundings.

I'm surrounded by a world full of more adventure than I could imagine.

I need to smile.

I need to listen.

I need to breathe.

I need air.

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

you really well expressed what you wanted to say or what you want to say via your words. I loved this piece n moreover i loved this one......
I need to slow down and breathe.
For so long I had buzzed by.
Not noticing my surroundings.
I'm surrounded by a world full of more adventure than I could imagine.....

wow, it's simple, sweet, adorable, intellectual, imaginable n so on...i liked this piece much....you know what you really did a great job here, all words're very nicely captured here....you i think dropped a reality, what we human want from life....
you refreshed me again, i'm happy n right now i'm just screamin' your this piece in my mind......(hope my mind' ain't gonna b blast by doin' this...lol)

well penned, i liked your workin' way, it's simple n very beautiful poem
have a nice day n writin; :)
have this from my heart for you 91.9 / 100 :)

take care......!!

[Blue Belle]

Amazing! I love how simple your works are, but they have big meanings. I am a fan of your writing too! :) This poem is inspirational.