Lost

I am lost in this world.

I have secrets I can’t say,

Thoughts I can’t relay.

Dreams I can’t control,

Feelings consuming my soul.

The whirlwind of thoughts, dreams, feelings and secrets,

They are my one true weakness.

I am lost

Hoping and praying that someone will notice me.

But at what cost?

Will I reach the very lowest I can be?

My thoughts are scattered,

And some of my dreams are shattered,

But I just want someone to notice me,

And find out who I can really be.

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Very nice work love it alot. Thabk you for sharing. We all get l I st sometimes. The key is never lose yourself.yours truely a mad lord

[Joy]

Thank you. Life cornfuzzling (yes I say that) some times, and we all end up a little lost. I love that I can now share my opinion on here, and people can relate. Thank you for reading it

[hi]

good this is really deep
i love how you did this,
and i think most feel the same i know i do