When it Rains

When it Rains

A Poem by ellie

When it Rains in the day,

I go outside just to see,

if i left anything outside.

When it thunders,

"BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!"

we run inside like little children,

so we wont get struck,

by flashes of lightning.

© 2008 ellie


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thanks !!! :D:D

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a very cute and fun poem... well done !!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice one.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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