My Daddy Named Me

My daddy named me Lola
my mom says lolawants this, lolawants that
makes it sound like I'm a brat
but i know I'm not the one that's sick in the head
all her friends are jealous and want my name
it drives her crazy insane
shouldn't your mother like you more
than her friends that think she's bore
you know what I sometimes hear?
they're only here for the beer

Reviews

[Ellie Qtz]

It is absolutely wonderful

[Rita L. Sev]

Lola, you have a talent for writing pieces that say it straight, in poetic form. From the gut is the way to go - make your name mean whatever YOU want it to. Good write!

[lolawants]

wow you almost made me cry rita, thanks sooooooo much!! :)

[Angi]

See? I told you so. Smart cookie!

[lolawants]

:) :) :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Cry if you must - then write. :)