Numb

Numb

A Poem by lolatodorov

I can't feel a thing-

Terribly numb, I reach for confort
From this loneliness I seek faith
I have nothing to hold on to.

I am the strength in motion
I am the machine that makes this mind a home.
I am not confortable,
I am not rising,
I am just waiting.

I can't breathe.
But somehow I manage to pull this off
This simulation of death in life.

© 2012 lolatodorov


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a very cynical piece. also expresses despair. this is rich in metaphors. evokes empathy. excellent job.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 11, 2012
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lolatodorov
lolatodorov

Lisboa, Lisboa, Portugal



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