Aquarium Girl

made out'a plastic

or maybe glass

you mess with me 

i kick your a**.

you think your bad

well take a look at me

i got swaggar

who you think you are?

trying to be me?

well that just crazy

aquarium girl

you make the seasickers wanna hurl.

XD!

Reviews

[Al R. Arce]

Anytime a poem makes me laugh, it deserves my feedback! Thanks for sharing!

[Karci Clest]

This was interesting and fun. Good write.

[Noizchild]

I love the title. Please capitalize the starts of each line.

[PoemRodent]

The visual and emotions in this write were fun... Good write!!!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Cute...............................................

[Shirlena]

Fighting words...sounds like you got it in for aquarium girl huh but I learned long time ago that it takes a bigger person to walk away from a fight and in my day you could get into a fight and that's all it was two fist, now a days people rather take the easiest and fatal way out...to shoot which is actually the biggest punk move in the world so I really hope you don't have to kick nobodies a_ _ but if you do, please make sure they're not packing first. Interesting write.

[Kai Rollins]

Line 5 had a typo with you're my friend. And well you're my friend :3 I liked this. It didn't need all of the typical. It was honest. Great write

[Sami Khalil]

An interesting title and poem...:).......................