My Family

i would like to dedicate this one to my mother, my father, and my 3 brothers, and my big sister. you guys know i really didn't think of you like you think i did. now that i'm grown i know.

everyone thought i hated you...

everyone just had to know...

you knew it...

so did i...

it's so magical...

fantastical...

i am your biggest fan

follow you until you love me

there's no othere superstar i rather be...

i won't stop until your mine

all i want is my name in those flashing lights

teardrops be crying

baby you'll be famous if you just try with me

i promise we'll make it

all in time

we can make it.

paparazi

love me

now that i am your's we can't see

that everything i knew

we knew

was our love

followed me until you loved me...

Reviews

[MADAM]

That was cute, but check your grammar please"^^) got a bit confused for a bit

[xMiss_Psychosis_Phantom..]

This was touching and adorable :)

[kublakhan27]

A touching piece that really puts things in perspective...great job :)

[Saddam]

This is for me.... I am very related with this. My big brother, every moment push me ahead to do what i want, my mother listen what I want to say. My whole family is with me. Thank God.
A very relative poem.
Thanks.

[MsJewel]

I think many can relate to your poem.
Very well written and a delight to read - love the pic too!

:) Julie

[Ashley Armstrong]

Families are wonderful. I also love that picture at the end. Mikey is so cute.

[Talia The Hedgehog]

i agree Mikey is cute!

[Kai Rollins]

Family is precious. I'm glad you decided to share this my friend. I applaud and enjoyed

[Kai Rollins]

(Also I believe it should be you're in line 10 my friend)

[Talia The Hedgehog]

sorry. ican't type. LOL XD

[Tony Larkin]

I love this. It's so emotional and relatable. Awesome job!

[Linda alexander]

baby you'll be famous if you just try with me
i promise we'll make it
all in time
we can make it.
Assuming this poem is about technology and mass medias, making people famous, taking videos and pictures, asking people to like them as they become partners in their progress and business expansions, not sure that is what poet meant, great write, really enjoyed

[Talia The Hedgehog]

thanks. i was really counting on the pic to give an idea but you pretty much summed it up!

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care