Glass

I laughed with you

I lived with you

I cried with uou

I danced with you'

I sang with you

my love where have you gone?

have you been eaten?

what's wrong with you?

do you hate me?

Reviews

[Moon]

To have made so many memories with someone, only to have them depart from the path that you both had walked on for so long is such a tragic event. Nice write Techno.

[Talia The Hedgehog]

thank you. GEEK ON! (thats what we used to say) LOL

[Moon]

You're welcome, GEEK ON? Saying that felt very weird to me lol!

[Talia The Hedgehog]

i am a total nerd. so....

[Moon]

Haha, it's all good

[radio raven]

Well I got what I paid for, nothing more, nothing less. Solid

[Kai Rollins]

This was pretty solid in it's sadness..melancholy (living up to your name I see.)
Minor typo my friend (3rd line) all in all.
Definitely something to keep in mind. Great write

[Talia The Hedgehog]

thank you! i am sure to fix that typo! i am NOT the one you would want to type something. i go SUPER fast and i have NO idea what i type.

[Shirlena]

Oh this poem is quite melancholy and looking over your line of poems I can see to write in this emotion is probably your calling. I like you short bio and I would love to be your friend...looking forward to reading more of your poetry but yes this is a very moving tale of loving someone, being there for them to seemingly have them dissipate.

[Talia The Hedgehog]

yeah. this is how i feel most of the time because my friends are never there for me. except for like 2 of them.

[Shirlena]

Well, you know good friends are hard to come by. I'm a good person and I'm a lot older than you but I don't any friends either. I have associates I hang out with from time to time that I care about but I don't have any best friends so I feel you but if you learn to like yourself first you can be your own best friend. I know my worth and they are the ones missing out not me :) and I'm sure people are missing our on you too :) Too bad for them.

[Talia The Hedgehog]

yep. that is already how i am! i feel the pain of many and hope just... hope that i can meet someone new EVERY day!

[Shirlena]

Well cool then :).

[Talia The Hedgehog]

looks like i cross off today! (i met you!)

[Shirlena]

Aww that's so sweet...I'm glad I met you too :)

[Talia The Hedgehog]

your welcome!