Crying In Heaven

Did you cry,

when i died?

well forget that

i am crying in heaven

the love the hate

i just don't get it

maybe i should call for help

maybe i should kill myself

maybe i am a different breed

maybe im not listening

"i don't care what you want"

you said

"you hate me"

i would scream

"why would you do this"

you would yell

"i don't know"

i would cry

you would just walk away

we cry only for the ones we love

me?

no

i never loved you

i never wanted to be with someone like you

i cry to this very day

up in the clouds and stars

you can't see me

i made up my mind because

i blame it on you, baby

"do you care

do you need something

do you want the love and soul you always wanted?"

i wanted you to say

"YES!"

i wanted to scream

but to this day

i only will say

"No."

"i don't want you."

i just dont love you

like i did yesterday.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Life is a b***h sometimes.Time though helps with the healing .This is a powerful heartfelt and sad poem :)

[Talia The Hedgehog]

that is how i'm feeling i guess.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well don't worry it will get better :)

[Talia The Hedgehog]

it's a rainy day down here in crawley. and FREEZING!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well that sucks lol.Hopefully it stops raining soon :)

[Talia The Hedgehog]

yeah. it rains A LOT!!!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

It does in my country too.But today it is very hot .

[Talia The Hedgehog]

where do you live? or is that classified?

[Vidya Bacchus]

I live in the Caribbean.My country is Trinidad and Tobago.

[Talia The Hedgehog]

oh i live in Crawley, England, UK

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay ...............:)

[Sami Khalil]

"i am crying in heaven
the love the hate
i just don't get it
maybe i should call for help
maybe i should kill myself
maybe i am a different breed
maybe im not listening"

Everything happens for a reason. Every taste has the salt and sugar unless it is bland. Things will get better I hope...A good write...:).................

[Talia The Hedgehog]

i was listening to Sail- AWOLNATION.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:).................

[Talia The Hedgehog]

lol.........

[Sami Khalil]

:)...........................

[Talia The Hedgehog]

minor typo in some of my poems!