broken Hearts

broken Hearts

A Poem by Talia The Hedgehog

my heart is broken
i am left unspoken
he did not love me
i just couldn't see
what he saw in me
so i let him down
his smiles turned into a frown
i may never laugh
i may never smile
my heart is left with a crack
which i do not need
just remember
good love is like a plant
it all starts out with a seed
if he really loves you 
he will bless you with those words
he will make you smile
he will help you when you fall
he is always there.
for you
for me
for him
and only him...

a rose speaks 
of love silently
in a language from
only the heart....

© 2014 Talia The Hedgehog


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I love how you wound in the whole flower thing, like seed, growth, rose AWSOME

Posted 10 Years Ago


As Valentines day approaches...lovely.
A warm image from rather disheartening beginnings (not the actual beginning but like...the feels of it ya kno?)

I enjoyed

Posted 10 Years Ago


Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

thank you. i like writing poems.
That was very sweet and well written, a very nice read. It was highly enjoyable.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I liked it. It was very well written. Its very good actually. Thank u for this read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

thanks. i got asked out 4 valentines day so i thought i'd make something like this
I really liked reading this. You did an amazing job. I also like the pictures at the end.

Posted 10 Years Ago


That was really good! I loved it, just in time for Valentine's time!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Talia The Hedgehog
Talia The Hedgehog

United Kingdom



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My name's Talia and I am a big fan of Ticci Toby, Lost Silver, Manic the Hedgehog, Silver the Hedgehog, Espio, and Shadow. I like a lot of things and if you are reading this, don't look out your windo.. more..

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