chapter 1: Just A Thought

                                     2D's point of veiw

i walked downstairs and i thought "whay don't we play anymore?". i opened the fridge and a person was sqished up in there. he handed me a bottle of water. i slammed the fridge and walked outside. i walked and walked until night time. i headed back home. a few miles to my street, i heard something. i looked around until i found a girl. "hi?" she nevously said. "um. is this the wrong time?" i asked looking at her tied together hands. "no. i don't mind company. and could you help me out here?" she asked. i unchained her. i couldent see her face or the way she looked. but when i looked at my hands they were covered in blood. "oh my gosh are you ok!" i signaled at my hands. she somehow fell down but i caught her just in time. "you need some help. i'll take you with me is that ok?" i asked. she nodded.

an hour later...

i was watching the walking dead until the girl woke up beside me. i saw what she looked like. she had long blue hair and was missing a couple of teeth. she had pale skin and full black eyes. "hi- 2D? OHMIGOSH! i am your BIGGEST fan!" she screamed. "i can tell." i said. "nah. i was born like this. i don't care though." she said. " i'm Sasha." she shook my hand.

 

Reviews

[Noizchild]

The formating of this could use a little work.

[Chaz Hemsworth]

I like the oversight on the fridge guy. Puts you in 2D' s mindset quite well. I do feel like you don't elaborate on events enough though. This chapter is better than some others in this story.

[Shaquana Adams]

There are some grammatical errors, but other than that the chapter is good. I wanted to know about the guy in the refrigerator, but at the same time I'm glad you left that out because it makes me want to read the next chapter. Good first chapter! :)

[Talia The Hedgehog]

thx. the guy in the refridreator is a guy who tried to kiddnap 2D so he took over his mind and made him a slave

[Tony Larkin]

Is 2D a real character or is he someone you made up? If hes an actual character from something, then I'm unsure how to respond to it, but its still pretty cool either way

[Talia The Hedgehog]

yes he is made up but not from my mind. they are all real people from real music bands.

[Tony Larkin]

Thats cool

[Talia The Hedgehog]

yes. VERY! i am addicted to them. especially 2D... (i have a crush on him. if you knew how he was you would too!!!)