Hooked On You.

Hooked On You.

A Poem by lois
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I can't get enough of him, nor he, I. It's lust, not love and he's bad for me.

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I want to sleep without dreaming
And wake without thoughts of you.
The taste of you on my lips.

Just one more fix
My spirit crushed
Yet I breathe in your smell
My body craves your touch
Just one more fix
My spirit crushed.

One more fix
It will never be enough .

I'm an addict, a user
Or
Are you using me?
Does it matter, when we misconstrue reality?

My mind consumed with thoughts of you
Oblivion....a place I cling to
Transfixed by you,
I want to be

I want to sleep and dream of you
Wake up where the world smells new
Our spirits free,
And you come to me.

2011 © Lorna Hunter

© 2011 lois


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lol ok Michael, I'm new to this so I'm still getting my head around things but I will eventually. I could spend all day reading what everyone else has written. I came across WritersCafe by accident, a happy accident. :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago



You have an effortless way of writing, I'm eager for you to transfer more poems from your blog on to here, so I can shuffle for the rubies and diamonds xD

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you EdwardBlue.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I know that feeling...it brings back such a discomfort ..Well written and powerful

Posted 13 Years Ago


you have the same problem my friend does. lol.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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