Whenever You Feel Lost

Sometimes you feel lost in your mind,
Trying to find a way out.
You fear that you can't escape,
But only when you are lost
Is where you can find yourself,
Outside of your thoughts.

Reviews

[Vagi]

What does outside signifies here? 👀 Do you mean beyond your thoughts?

[Lobos]

By 'outside,' I mean stepping beyond the constant flow of thoughts. It's about giving your mind a break from overthinking, allowing things to naturally become clearer.

[Vagi]

Hmm okayy I got it

[Jeyanthi]

Thinking outside of the box,
can dim and tame the negative aspects...
You Said so much in short verses...
Keep writing!!

What about Samurai? Gone for good 😅...
During my childhood days I liked to watch Samurai jack...

[Lobos]

"Hi, Jeyanthi!

Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words! I'm really happy to know that my verses resonated with you. And yes, thinking outside the box truly helps to tame the negative aspects of life, doesn’t it?

I used to love 'Samurai Jack' too, it brings back good childhood memories. Who knows, maybe the samurai will return in my stories one day!

Once again, thanks for the support. I’ll keep writing!

Warm regards,
Lobos"

[Aarti Sriram]

Come to think of it , ain't that true!
Short and crisp and a pause to ponder : when you are lost is where you can find yourself..
Do share more and keep writing dear Lobos!

Warm cheers,
Aarti Sriram

[John the Baptist]

Much wisdom in this one. Our thoughts can be based on mistaken beliefs stemming from negative experiences. If we let ourselves be guided by these thoughts, we are likely to encounter more negative experiences.