"41 Syllables Are Not Enough"

You're the real Wonder Woman...

 

Mother

Selfless, irreplaceable

Loving, correcting, sacrificing

Best friend, adviser, ally, confidante

Understanding, helping, supporting

Special, trustworthy

Friend

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

Short and to the point... Nothing can ever replace mother's love and I love how this poem emphasizes on that

[Zoya]

All true. None can replace a mother. Wonderful words!

[L.C. Jarrette]

thank you very much zoe...i'm still reading the poems you sent me. :)

[Zoya]

No problem

[SPIDEY]

very well written! A mother's love can never be written, only felt. but you have described it. loved it

[L.C. Jarrette]

thank you for reading...i'm glad you like it

[Surya]

Mothers truly are.....
Words are in efficient and insufficient to prove the worth of mama....I loved it..:)

[L.C. Jarrette]

yes...words are not enough

[John the Baptist]

Sometimes grammar is not needed. Single words, placed correctly, can communicate more meaning than all the sentences in the world. Well done.

[L.C. Jarrette]

ay...hehe thank you
but please do correct me if there are any grammatical errors. i am open anyway
thanks for reading! :)

[Relic]

Maternal love is the strongest. Even in the animal kingdom it is instinctive. Well done.

[L.C. Jarrette]

you are definitely right! thank you relic...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

so true dear...all of us love our mothers and they really have this deep place in the corner of our hearts....
may god bless them with good health and may they be smiling all the time....
nicely penned...i loved it.

[L.C. Jarrette]

thank you very much! :)

[writ rajat]

I think it should be 41 syllables are not enough

[L.C. Jarrette]

ay!! oops...haha
thanks rajat!
:D

[writ rajat]

Very great title..........

[Najam Us Saher]

Truly said. Very well written.

[L.C. Jarrette]

thank you najam...

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺